BIK Writing
This is my proudest piece amongst all. Inspired by one of my best friend in school. “Sugar” was her family name. She now works in a post-secondary setting and holds a doctorate degree in English literature.
Sugar
What is sugar?
I am not sure.
Everyone says you need salt in your daily life, or else you would not survive;
But I say you will be fine, as long as you have sugar in your mind.
So what is sugar then?
A Dixieland tune with an harmonized end.
Excess sugar would cause you sore, and so would salt;
Everything has a flaw, and so do laws.
Do you see sugar?
It’s everywhere.
Sugar in dessert, makes you sweet;
Salt in congee, makes you cheap.
Do you hear sugar?
It’s everywhere.
Sugar gives you strength;
Salt forces you to drink.
What does sugar look like?
Tiny, but white and bright.
Sugar gains you colours;
Salt keeps you regular.
So what exactly does sugar represent?
Happiness and love among truthful friends.
If you want to have a boring life, just bear salt in your mind;
But I would rather die, if I cannot have sugar in my time.
Burden, 1996
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